Проверьте текст на английском языке: Many people believe that the future will be bright, but not all people think so. Let's have a closer look at this. A lot of people believe that the future will be better. The scientific and technological revolution will develop faster on our planet. The wars between the countries will stop, and peace between different nations will come to the world. Parks will be built instead of factories, and a lot of new forests will be planted. The air on our planet will become cleaner and fresher. Our planet will become cleaner if people protect the environment. Also, a lot of people expect that our life in the future will be worse. Science is moving very far ahead, so robots will take over the world. Every year there will be more wars, so people will die. Parks will not exist, because arms factories will be everywhere. People will wear masks, because the planet will be very dirty. Each person chooses their own future. We do not know what will happen after many years. If we want the future to be bright, we will need to save and protect our planet.

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Many people believe that the future will be bright, but not everyone thinks so. Let us have a closer look at this problem.

Some people believe that the future will be better. Science and technology will develop faster on our planet. Wars between countries will stop, and peace will come to the world. Parks will be built instead of factories, and many new forests will be planted. The air on our planet will become cleaner and fresher if people protect the environment.

However, other people think that life in the future will be worse. Science may go too far, and robots may become dangerous for people. There may be more wars, and many people may die. Parks may disappear because arms factories will be everywhere. People may have to wear masks because the planet will be very polluted.

Each person chooses their own future. We do not know what will happen in many years. If we want the future to be bright, we must save and protect our planet.

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