my favorite fixies cartoon, it was made in 2010. This is a very funny and educational cartoon.
the main characters of this cartoon are sim and nolik. Simka is an older sister, and Nolik. Nolik is little brother Simki. their parents' names are Papus and Masya. they go to school where they have many friends. their friends name is: Masya, spylia, faer and igrik.

Of these characters, I like Simka more, as she is very kind, smart and cheerful

можете пожалуйста проверить артикли и тд., у меня просто с ними проблема. =_​

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My favorite cartoon is The Fixies. It was made in 2010. This is a very funny and educational cartoon. The main characters are Simka and Nolik. Simka is an older sister, and Nolik is her little brother. Their parents' names are Papus and Masya. They go to school, where they have many friends. Their friends' names are Shpulya, Fire and Igrek. Of all these characters, I like Simka the most, because she is very kind, smart and cheerful.

Main corrections:

• My favorite cartoon is... — так звучит естественнее.
• The Fixies — название мультфильма пишется с большой буквы.
• Simka is an older sister — нужен артикль an, потому что дальше слово начинается с гласного звука.
• her little brother — «её младший брат».
• Their parents' names — «имена их родителей».
• Of all these characters — правильно: «из всех этих персонажей».

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