Эссе на тему «Любимый космонавт»

Критерии:
1. 120-130 слов в эссе.
2. 3 абзаца (1. Космос — это... 2. Имя, жизнь и достижения космонавта. 3. Заключение. Какое качество вы бы хотели перенять у космонавта, что вам в нём нравится больше. Почему? Аргументы.)
3. Правильная грамматическая структура предложений.
4. Используйте Past Simple.
5. Используйте Past Continuous.
6. Используйте неправильные глаголы.
7. Используйте вводные конструкции: Thus, I think that, I suppose, I agree, I disagree, Firstly, Secondly.

Space is the vast world beyond our planet. Firstly, it lets people explore the unknown and learn how Earth looks from above. Secondly, space research helps scientists create technologies. Thus, I think that space is beautiful and important for humanity.

Yuri Gagarin was my favourite cosmonaut. He was born in 1934, became a pilot, and trained for the first human spaceflight. On 12 April 1961, he flew around Earth in Vostok 1. While he was travelling, he saw our planet from space and sent messages to the ground. His flight opened a new era.

I suppose Gagarin’s courage made him a hero. I agree that he showed responsibility. I would like to copy his bravery, because he did his duty despite danger. Thus, I admire him for believing in his goal.

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