1. What is wrong with this text?
The girl's name was Angela. They built the best birdhouse ever! Then
they decided to put birdhouses on the trees. One summer-day a girl met
two of her friends. At first, they wanted to play in the yard. Now they are
proud of their work. Suddenly they saw birds singing on the trees but they
knew the birds needed some place to live.

The text has several problems: the events are in the wrong order, the tenses are mixed, and the pronoun they is unclear at the beginning. There are also missing spaces: Then they, met two.

A logical version is: “The girl’s name was Angela. One summer day, Angela met two of her friends. At first, they wanted to play in the yard. Then they decided to build birdhouses. They built the best birdhouses ever! Suddenly, they saw birds singing in the trees, but they knew that the birds needed a place to live. They decided to put the birdhouses in the trees. Now they are proud of their work.”

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