14 mistakes in this text. Yesterday, I gone to a party with my friend David. He study english with me at university. He wanted to be introduced to Lucy wo he fancied. David and I satt in the corner of the room. He didn ' t making the first move to go and see her. He waited for so long to tell her that he had a crush on her. He taked a drink to get some energy and after a few minutes of endless hesitation, he walked to her. David remained mute. She gave a hint of a smile, noticing David blushing. She asked him if he enjoyed the party. He whispered ' Yes ' and had a glance at me. I wincked at him. That was it. Feeling reassured and confident, he told her which feelings he was experiencing. She suddenly looked sullen. She looked embarased. She could hardly say a word but after a little seconds, she said : ' I ' m sorry to deceive you but actually I fancy Sebastian ' . David fainted : ' a friend in need is a friend inded ' !

В тексте 14 ошибок:

1. I gone → I went
   После указания на прошедшее время yesterday нужна форма Past Simple глагола go: went.

2. He study → He studies
   В Present Simple после he к глаголу добавляется окончание -s.

3. english → English
   Названия языков в английском пишутся с заглавной буквы.

4. wo → whom
   Здесь нужно относительное местоимение whom, поскольку Люси является объектом действия: he fancied her. В разговорной речи также допустимо who.

5. satt → sat
   Правильная форма Past Simple глагола sit — sat.

6. didn’t making → didn’t make
   После вспомогательного глагола didn’t используется начальная форма смыслового глагола без -ing.

7. waited for so long → waited so long
   В конструкции со значением «так долго ждал, прежде чем что-то сделать» предлог for не нужен.

8. taked → took
   Глагол take является неправильным: take — took — taken.

9. wincked → winked
   Правильное написание глагола — winked.

10. which feelings → what feelings
    Здесь речь идёт не о выборе из определённого набора чувств, поэтому используется what, а не which.

11. embarased → embarrassed
    В слове embarrassed две буквы r и две буквы s.

12. a little seconds → a few seconds
    Seconds — исчисляемое существительное во множественном числе, поэтому нужно a few, а не a little.

13. deceive you → disappoint you
    Deceive означает «обмануть, ввести в заблуждение». В этом контексте Люси говорит: «Мне жаль тебя разочаровывать», поэтому подходит disappoint.

14. inded → indeed
    Правильное написание слова — indeed.

Исправленный текст:

Yesterday, I went to a party with my friend David. He studies English with me at university. He wanted to be introduced to Lucy, whom he fancied. David and I sat in the corner of the room. He didn’t make the first move to go and see her. He waited so long to tell her that he had a crush on her. He took a drink to get some energy, and after a few minutes of endless hesitation, he walked over to her.

David remained mute. She gave a hint of a smile, noticing David blushing. She asked him if he enjoyed the party. He whispered, “Yes,” and had a glance at me. I winked at him. That was it. Feeling reassured and confident, he told her what feelings he was experiencing.

She suddenly looked sullen. She looked embarrassed. She could hardly say a word, but after a few seconds, she said, “I’m sorry to disappoint you, but actually I fancy Sebastian.”

David fainted. “A friend in need is a friend indeed!”